Two Knives

By watedroplet

I was stuck in the middle of another poem and could not think much, so I shifted to this poem. This poem is inspired by Robert Frost's poem "Fire and Ice." I have borrowed a few words from lines 3 and 5 of the original poem. 


Fear of fire,

flare like a wildfire

where the world will end in flames

without having been tasted my desire 

I could feel the pain of perishing twice;

putting me on wheels to seek 

something that cools and preserves

like the ice world

curled in ivory

while their stick-to-itiveness

is as sharp as knife

piercing every depth

for freezing point 

has no limit. 


©water2025

31.10.2025.


This post is a part of Blogchatter Half Marathon 2025

Comments

  1. Tomichan Matheikal1 November 2025 at 09:19

    A symbolic journey from fiery desire to icy preservation — from burning passion to emotional numbness. It suggests the agony of feeling “the pain of perishing twice,” perhaps meaning to be destroyed first by desire, then by denial.

    Elegant rhymes and stunning imagery 👍

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    1. Water1 November 2025 at 11:04

      Your analysis adds much meaning to my poem. Thank you, sir, for your analysis.

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